He looked back at Dean, his heart aching at the pleading expression on his brother’s face. And somewhere inside of him, something broke. Never before had he seen his brother look so weak, so defeated. Even when Dean had lay dying in the hospital after being electrocuted, there had been a fire in him that couldn’t be extinguished. But now – now, his brother just seemed so tired, so deadened, that is scared Sam. The only thing that kept him going seemed to be the desperation and hope in his eyes as he looked at Sam, begging him not to kill their father.
Definitely the best paragraph!! I loved this, Liz! You should write more, though you should consider getting a beta. ^^;; But grammar aside, I loved all the concepts here! And I really liked where Sam realizes Dean's his constant. Just lovely job overall. ♥
Annnd... Sam's HANDS aren't resting on the steering wheel. It's just his hand. His left hand. o___o;; I noticed cuz I drive like that too, with just one hand on top of the steering wheel. ^^;; Um. Yeah. :D
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Date: 2006-05-08 06:22 am (UTC)Definitely the best paragraph!! I loved this, Liz! You should write more, though you should consider getting a beta. ^^;; But grammar aside, I loved all the concepts here! And I really liked where Sam realizes Dean's his constant. Just lovely job overall. ♥
Annnd... Sam's HANDS aren't resting on the steering wheel. It's just his hand. His left hand. o___o;; I noticed cuz I drive like that too, with just one hand on top of the steering wheel. ^^;; Um. Yeah. :D