ext_62053 ([identity profile] papered.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] genetics2008-11-10 11:49 pm

Super Junior: places I can't reach

Title: places I can't reach
Author: [livejournal.com profile] papered
Fandom: Super Junior
Characters/Pairings: Heechul, Hanchul
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Summary: it's not until hangeng comes, all lilting accent and broken korean, that he realizes the difference between accepting and embracing.
Notes: Written for round 01 challenge 05 of [livejournal.com profile] seouldout for the prompt higher.


heechul's different, but it's okay, because sm is home and there's an acceptance in everyone's teasing. it's not until hangeng comes, all lilting accent and broken korean, that he realizes the difference between accepting and embracing.

but sjm happens. hangeng happily packs his bags. heechul swallows the bile in his throat (forces a smile).



he's back, but something's different now. there's a new confidence in hangeng's voice when he says something in mandarin that has siwon smiling and kyuhyun smirking and heechul trying (failing).

that night, heechul dreams of hangeng dancing and flying and going to places heechul can't reach.


fic written: November 7th, 2008

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[identity profile] waveless.livejournal.com 2008-11-11 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
:( broken hanchul

[identity profile] mardigrasmaven.livejournal.com 2008-11-11 09:37 am (UTC)(link)
Awww Heechul. *hugs* I feel for him. D:

[identity profile] korichan.livejournal.com 2008-11-14 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Aww~ yet again another beautiful fic. I feel bad for Heechul being left out (even without Geng meaning to).

[identity profile] nocturnes.livejournal.com 2008-11-15 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, Heechul. :(
This was beatiful. <3

[identity profile] mi-iseul.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
*adds to chorus of awwwwwwwwww* <3 Very vivid imagery and I really liked it. The angst doesn't hurt either. <3

[identity profile] innocently-hot.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
ah, beautiful~
it's not that hankyung doing it on purpose, right?
it's not broken hanchul either, i like to think that heechul was just feeling insecure... haha...
save the hanchul~

[identity profile] miraa.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
Aww...such a bittersweet ending.
But I like the way you characterized Hangeung...it seems very realistic.

[identity profile] fadedandinsane.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 06:42 am (UTC)(link)
T___T
and i don't know what to say.
and your heechullie and hannie are just so wonderfully characterized.

it's really good

[identity profile] takteng-kamote.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
awww...sad. But so spot on :(

[identity profile] takteng-kamote.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
and ohmigod, you're listenign to Hopipola!

...no wonder this story is so sad :(

[identity profile] kiirohana-16.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 07:45 am (UTC)(link)
NOOOOT_T

[identity profile] vic-sim.livejournal.com 2008-11-16 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwww.....why...I feel so sad for Heechul.....
you have to make them better?please?

beautifully written in such few words...