The crimson flush of her skin is like the thought of water to a dying man in a desert – except it’s worse, because for him, the water is literally in front of him. And he has to resist, because it’s the only thing he can do.


Wow. I think that is the best description I've read yet of Edward's lust for Bella's blood. I think maybe it's because you wrote in a situation we can all relate to and understand because we all get thirsty=P
Wonderful=]