Super Junior: how to glue together the pieces of your heart

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Title: how to glue together the pieces of your heart
Author: papered
Fandom: Super Junior
Characters/Pairings: Sungmin, Kyumin, Kyumi
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Summary: Sungmin's always been good at hanging on.
Notes: Written for round 01 challenge 01 of seouldout, for the prompt "sand".

Kyuhyun is young and bright and idealistic, and so Sungmin clings to him – clings on and doesn’t let go. But it’s like grasping at sand from a broken hourglass, and grains are already slipping through cracks he can’t quite seal. There are interviews, and Kyuhyun and Zhoumi seem so close, and still, Sungmin holds on. (tells himself it doesn’t hurt)

Kyuhyun comes back, full of smiles, but not a single one for him. When Sungmin finally opens his palms, he realizes there’s nothing left, not even the last trickles of sand. He’d been holding on to nothing all this time.

fic started: October 1st, 2008
fic ended: October 2nd, 2008

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Comments

[lovely-tatsuha.livejournal.com]

That was good
i love the idea

i’ve added you if you don’t mind

Good luck ^_^

[papered.livejournal.com]

Of course I don't mind! :) Thank you!

[kyurisma.livejournal.com]

Good luck for the writing contest bb♥

I liked the imagery of Sungmin holding on to sand trickling through his fingers.

[papered.livejournal.com]

♥! THANK YOU <3

[sujusakana.livejournal.com]

Really beautiful.
The way you used the prompt was very...smart? LOL.
I dunno how to phrase it =___=;;
I fail at english.

But this is really good, i loved it~♥

[papered.livejournal.com]

♥!

Thanks for reading!

[mardigrasmaven.livejournal.com]

Oh... it was so sad... for Sungmin to cling on tightly to something that's already slipped loose from his grasp...
You wrote it really well! ♥

[papered.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[fadedandinsane.livejournal.com]

cries because kyumin is one of her otps, but she loves kyumi all the same

but it's okay, sungminnie has hyukkie, right?

and it was really well written. honest.

♥

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♥

I'm glad you enjoyed!

[sallysync.livejournal.com]

Sungmin, I'm here. :(
Loved it!

[papered.livejournal.com]

Thank you! <3

[daffydilly121.livejournal.com]

very well written
i love the analogy

[papered.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked this! :) TY.

[kyuhyunlover3.livejournal.com]

T.T poor minnie!

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Thanks for reading!

[korichan.livejournal.com]

Ah, I really loved how you used the prompt for this. It was so beautiful, and I love stories with broken!Min. <333

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Thank you for reading! :)